Nogitsune II

A melancholy melody
interrupts the mindless chatter,
cutlery clatter,
crash,
as light bulbs pop,
overhead
where ah’s and ooh’s evaporate,
enveloped in violin's wail
somewhere on stage.

A lone piano bawls and moans
with the sympathetic tapping
of a snare drum that
throbs
like the small feet,
swollen,
of the petit maître d', ‘dear’,
who scurries with candles that drip
hot-white wax tears.

Sakura tables light up, chestnut-brown
grotesque faces sway in orange hues,
clink-clink, “Here’s to health!”
whispers,
foggy eyes stare
into the gloom where street lights creep
through
backstage air vents that gives life;
stage shadow sways.

A few wooden geta sandals pick up the beat
that oscillates wildly between
anxiety and glee,
until
the spotlight shines,
illuminating kimono,
sleeves
long and red, dripping with colour,
cherry sorrow.

Comments

Ramon

it's late notice - but you should enter this.

You're amazing, you know that? In all the shit I wade through in the interweb, you I stop for. Every time.

Dolce

Thanks. Ja, a little short notice. Working today (Saturday), so there's no time to squeeze anything in. But I'll save the link for next time. Thank you for reading my scribbles, Dolce. It means a lot to me.

Ramon

I like! Very dramatic. A hint of Kabuki there at the end.

Lily.

Very dramatic indeed. Bit of a drama queen, I am...
Hope you had a great weekend (hope you are feeling better).

Ramona

R&R has almost done the trick, thanks!

Wow Ramona

Loved this. The sweet anticipation and tension before a performance starts.
"cherry sorrow" is an excellent wat to describe those lips and powdery faces.

PS: when are you expecting the pitter patter of little feet?

Fluts.

We had a false alarm a while back. And it will have to stay that way for a while; I'm going back to school and trying to finish building my house before the end of this year. Ja.
I really want to move to Japan in a few years or so, learn a new language and learn how to cook proper Japanese food.

Thanks for the read.