Shadow Walker
In the after hours -
if one can call it that –
in the furthermost corner,
he finishes his ale,
(warm, as ale should be),
pushes his chair back
and straightens his robes,
stained with moon’s shadows, winter pale.
Behind the counter –
a rickety plank of sorts –
the barmaid shines a mug,
dark-stained rag in hand,
molded by bitter odors;
he nods, she pours
another frothy head that erupts
and dissipates like dormant volcanoes’ gas over land.
Near the middle of the room -
at table number seven -
the wager reaches its peak;
too many jokers that gaffle-gaw-har,
slurp-burp and foam fart -
coins stacked high, leaning towers
of promise, bent and rusted,
the moon pulls her veil down and then plays her card.
At the corner table -
where window’s whispered words
whistle the candles to sleep,
Shadow Walker melts, takes flight
into the shallow stone slabs
in the heart of the Red Lion Tavern
where the stakes are high
if you’re just passing through in the after hours of life.
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And this one...
this one.
I can almost feel myself getting sucked into this half world.
I know it's there.
Just beyond my reckoning.
ramon:morti
i havent got an analysis - dont even have the words to tell you exactly how it reaches me - but i experienced this on a purely visceral/visual level.
ive been just a trifle lost lately - not unusual, following a journey back home... and as a result, quite drawn to the ritual and mystery of my 'old ways'... the pageantry and 'timelesness' of it all can be grounding, and thats what i need at the mo...so this work (having the same qualities) just wove itself into my psyche... very reminiscent of the visuals that robert jordan always seems to evoke for me.
when i pop in here - i am reminded just how much i enjoy your 'brain-fruits'... an absolute feast. without fail. yum.
Morts.
Ahh, the old ways. Strangely enough (or maybe not?) I have gone back to my 'old ways', as you so put it. The old me.
You've probably noticed I've written a lot about rebirth lately. Getting and staying clean.
Glad you enjoyed it, Morts. Took me bloody forever to get down on paper.
Goddamnit Ramon
You capture the mood so perfectly. Elements of existentialism (mostly perceived), underlaid with something decidedly desperate and tense which is at odds with the surface scene. I love this line..."where window’s whispered words whistle the candles to sleep". Wonderful post.
Ta, Lily.
Not sure about the 'if' in the last line, though...
Any suggestions?
Thanks for the kind words. Always appreciated.
Ramon
If/when both work. I think that whatever your first instinct was, is usually correct.
Ramon
If/when both work. I think that whatever your first instinct was, is usually correct.