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Submitted by dex on August 6, 2008 - 23:37
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in die skadu van my bloedboom
lê ek arms onder die kop,
kyk na die wolke.
dis seer om te glo:
hierdie dinge is on-geërf,
maar self gekweek.
(die spieël lieg nie)

OF:

in die skadu van die broodboom
lê ek arms onder die kop,
bewonder die wolke.
dis goed om te glo:
my vingers in die gras,
die gras in die aarde
(alles is een)

Comments

Ja Dex

Submitted by Tarnished Lily on August 11, 2008 - 14:25.

Its all a matter of perspective. Enjoyed this.

Sorta understand this Dextra

Submitted by Arbchick on August 8, 2008 - 12:36.

give or take 54 words.

Very nice Mister.

Dex,

Submitted by Dolorez on August 7, 2008 - 10:17.

en.

Dex

Submitted by Semisweet on August 7, 2008 - 10:14.

I would also go for option 2.

Beautifully written.

Dex

Submitted by clare on August 7, 2008 - 08:53.

Earlier this week I would have been completely drawn to Option 1, but a little sunshine is peaking past the clouds and I like the idea of alles is een, it's working for me. And just before I make it all about me again, I love your poetry.