Unexplained Final
As he descended the stairs, disgruntled that the body had provided nothing in the way of clarification, Morgan felt defeated. All he had was conjecture, rumour and a strong hunch; nothing added up to any kind of coherent scenario.
After telephoning Elias to come and fetch him, he waited in the parking lot. It had been a long and very strange day so he was prepared to admit that perhaps his paranoid suspicion that the coroner’s office was concealing something from the police was just that! Paranoid.
The police car stopped in front of him with Elias in the driver’s seat. Opening the car door, he was assailed by the smell of fresh wood smoke.
“You go see your Gran?” Morgan asked with a grin.
The rueful Elias nodded. “I smell like her house, right? I thought I’d just drop in for a quick bite to eat. I was starving”.
“Your Gran is a real character, isn’t she?” Morgan commented fondly. Grandmother Ndudo always made a fuss of Morgan when she saw him.
Steering the conversation away from his Gran, Elias asked, “What did Ice say about Mrs Palframan’s cause of death?”
“Heart attack”, Morgan responded tersely. He considered telling Elias about his sense of inexplicable unease at the outcome, but decided that encouraging Elias to indulge his superstitions would not be setting a good example.
Elias nodded sagely and held his tongue, not wanting to say anything that would betray his knowledge of the mystical justice that had been meted out at the Palframan house that night.
Morgan broke the silence. “Can you drop me at home? I really need to crash now. I’ve been up since just after one this morning. You should knock off too”, he suggested.
Bidding Elias goodbye outside his house, Morgan stripped and took a long shower before retiring to bed. Lying against the pillows, his thoughts turned back 35 years or so to his pre-school days and his older cousin, Vernon, a cruel and reckless boy that he hadn’t much liked. His mother had dragged Morgan with her to visit Aunt Ava one day and Vernon had spitefully locked him out of the tree house. After a heartbroken Morgan and his mother had gone home, the tree house had burned down with Vernon inside it. The young Morgan’s fear of fire had been born that night.
So it was hardly a surprise that, as he dropped off to sleep, his dreams were filled with the slanted, molten eyes of big black cats as large as leopards that set fire to the grass as their flaming footsteps padded across the veldt.
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Hey Lily
I've just read this story now. Really great!
Wouldn't the world be so much simpler, and wouldn't we accomplish so much more if we all just told the truth and didn't hide things?
*sigh*
Probably not.
Dusts
Thanks for reading. Yes, a culture of reticence doesn't do anyone any favours, but it runs deep in the psyche of certain individuals/cultural groupings/nationalities.
Lily
Only caught up now......!
very cool, i really enjoyed this.
MJ
Sorry I only saw your comment now. Thank you for your encouragement.
Lils
I missed this whole one...any chance you could email me the whole version to ladolcevitasa@yahoo.com? Grovel grovel?
Dolch
Sent to you late yesterday afternoon...
Me too, Lily.
I've been busy and missed the last few installments.
Thanks. ramonez1ster@gmail.com
Ramona
On its way to you via my webmail address.
TL
Can you perhaps email it to me as well please.... cold.queen@hotmail.com
Thanx :)
TL
This turned out very well but for me there is a little missing there. I dont know what it is (or maybe I missed one) but there is a piece missing.
I will print it and read it all together and see if it still feels that way.
Ok. Enough from me.
Nicely written.
Sems
I thought I'd tied up the loose ends as much as I could, but maybe not? Thanks for reading it all the way through.