Ankles crossed, you sit
as you pretend to listen
to the child's story,
polishing your nails
as she speaks of other worlds;
you are not worthy.
Her child-like wisdom,
lost on deaf ears forever;
you've lost everything:
Broken relations?
merely a ship on the rocks
and a treasure lost.
Financial burden?
She's told you all about it -
your shoulder massage
was more important,
as was your date with that man
who used you, rag doll.
Well, now she is gone,
and your nails are chipped to fuck,
your shoulder slumping.
Comments
Ramon
Ouch.
Oy Ramon
Guilty as charged
Ramon
SO often we take the things that are important to us for granted and we focus on that which is so unimportant in the bigger scheme of things. Then when it's gone we have so many regrets and 'what if' questions. We need to start learning to appreciate what we have and focus on that.
This was beautiful.
Ramon
We pay ALL our relationships too little attention and wonder why they fall apart. Moments with our loved ones should be cherished to the full. Bugger the excuses about the treadmill of modern day living and the lack of time to appreciate the little things! But, we all fail, don't we? And pay the price.
man Ramon...
How we so often miss out on this gift, hey...stupid adults that we are.
I love stuff like this. It reminds me, for a while, what to do.
Thanks :)
Keep reminding us.
Ladies.
Thanks for the kind words.
I am just as guilty, and that's why I wrote it...