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The Connoisseur

Submitted by Ramon on June 21, 2008 - 16:11
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Her evening dress danced
on the first floor balcony -
swimming pool ripples,
black nails, and red wine -
swirled, sniffed, sip-gulped, and savored -
ruby eyes sparkled
in peach or delight?
Bottle green veins on her hands
implied otherwise.

Connoisseur of men;
she finished the bottle and
left me in the pool.

Comments

Ramon

Submitted by Dolce on June 24, 2008 - 15:36.

this reminds me of that sea witch in that Disney version of The Little Mermaid. The big fat one who steals her voice.

Dolce.

Submitted by Ramon on June 24, 2008 - 15:48.

Never saw that one. I should probably get it for the little ones.
I went shopping for cartoons with them om Saturday and bought Cars (which they really liked) and Doctor Strange (which I watched alone!)

It's a belter, R

Submitted by Dolce on June 24, 2008 - 15:52.

but my favourite is still Aladin. Robin Williams cracks me up.

This is true.

Submitted by Ramon on June 24, 2008 - 16:07.

Have to get that one again, too. Can't leave DVD's lying around with these two...

Ramon

Submitted by Tarnished Lily on June 23, 2008 - 08:57.

What an alluring creature...but cold, very cold!

super cool this Ramon

Submitted by Arbchick on June 23, 2008 - 08:48.

'Bottle green veins on her hands
implied otherwise.'

hmmmmm......almost reptilian...n-i-c-e!

Ramon

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on June 22, 2008 - 20:43.

Loved this. The distance between the two and the wateriness of the words. The image of that woman. So seductive.

Frankly / Arb / Lily.

Submitted by Ramon on June 23, 2008 - 14:55.

Thanks for the read.