The Knight
On his knees he went,
head bowed in admiration
for the silver blade.
Nothing comes for free-
nights he’d spent alone in prayer,
begging for this day.
Angelic he looked,
muscles bulging under white;
molten metal words
(metallic on tongue)
delighted the bystanders’
cotton-eared beliefs.
Filthy were his knees
when he received his armor;
chain mail on a tray -
honor is a meal
had with silver chopstick swords;
heavy metal hearts
pierced by promises
of bravery and riches;
blatant lies for life.
He died the next day -
a boy of twenty-seven -
by the river bed.
Black Dragon waited,
ripped his head clear from his neck,
swallowed his helmet,
and used his rib bone
(cold flesh dangling over lip);
daggers need cleaning.
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Now this one
I love.
All white and shimmering.
Empty colours.
Ramon
Blind loyalty. Scary stuff. Poor kid.
Lovely images, again.
Ramon
It was then as it is now - life is cheap and honour, though a lofty ideal, is seldom found at the end of a weapon - which ever side you happen to be standing on. I read this with relish over the weekend.
Lily.
You are 100% correct; life is cheap.
Liked this Ramon
I find the knighting exercise almost ominous. The blade is rested on the shoulder...inches from the neck...almost a symbol of limited time till death.
See you're managing to write your poem a day Ramon - and of such quality - respect.
Loved these lines especially:
'chain mail on a tray -
honor is a meal
had with silver chopstick swords;
heavy metal hearts'
Right you are, Arb.
That's exactly what it's about.
Thanks.