The Knight

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On his knees he went,
head bowed in admiration
for the silver blade.

Nothing comes for free-
nights he’d spent alone in prayer,
begging for this day.

Angelic he looked,
muscles bulging under white;
molten metal words

(metallic on tongue)
delighted the bystanders’
cotton-eared beliefs.

Filthy were his knees
when he received his armor;
chain mail on a tray -

honor is a meal
had with silver chopstick swords;
heavy metal hearts

pierced by promises
of bravery and riches;
blatant lies for life.

He died the next day -
a boy of twenty-seven -
by the river bed.

Black Dragon waited,
ripped his head clear from his neck,
swallowed his helmet,

and used his rib bone
(cold flesh dangling over lip);
daggers need cleaning.

Comments

Now this one

I love.

All white and shimmering.

Empty colours.

Ramon

Blind loyalty. Scary stuff. Poor kid.

Lovely images, again.

Ramon

It was then as it is now - life is cheap and honour, though a lofty ideal, is seldom found at the end of a weapon - which ever side you happen to be standing on. I read this with relish over the weekend.

Lily.

You are 100% correct; life is cheap.

Liked this Ramon

I find the knighting exercise almost ominous. The blade is rested on the shoulder...inches from the neck...almost a symbol of limited time till death.

See you're managing to write your poem a day Ramon - and of such quality - respect.

Loved these lines especially:

'chain mail on a tray -

honor is a meal
had with silver chopstick swords;
heavy metal hearts'

Right you are, Arb.

That's exactly what it's about.
Thanks.