Guinevere and the Magical Forest
Once upon a time there was a girl called Guinevere. Others had spoken of magical forests and Guinevere had listened. She had been to many places, been in many a forest, some, very very beautiful. But she had never been to a magical one before. The thing about magical forests was that they were magical, mighty and usually forbidden. People who had been near them spoke of 'listening trees' and strange warm winds that had swept over them and melted away sadnesses. People who had been in them spoke of 'healing leaves' and branches that swayed in ways that were quite extraordinary.
Magical forests had not always been forests. The legend goes that magical forests start out as a clump of trees that are created magical and are destined to become a mighty forest. However, they need a degree of cultivating, nurturing and tending to to become just that. It takes time, patience and love to grow a clump of magical trees into a mighty, magical forest; because magical trees are prone to sprout parasitic plants in their efforts to touch the sky.
A clump of magical trees doesn't really look that different from any other clump of trees. Magical forests can also be mistaken, at face value, for ordinary forests - many forests being beautiful and all of that. But when you are near a magical tree or magical forest, you feel the magic.
It must be said that not everyone knows how to cultivate, nurture and tend to magical trees. Not everyone knows how to grow a magical forest. In fact, there are many who cut down magical trees, break branches off of them, steal their leaves - all in their desire to possess the magic themselves. Of course, magic doesn't work that way. But, if you're lucky enough to find a clump of magical trees, and you're clever enough and patient enough and hard working enough to cultivate, nurture and tend to them - you will have yourself a magical forest one day...and that is how they become forbidden - well, forbidden to those that haven't cultivated, nurtured and tended to them, that is.
In a glen not terribly far from where Guinevere lived, a clump of magical trees stood. When there were but 19 of them, they were discovered. The discoverer cultivated, nurtured and tended to these magical trees until a mighty, magical forest was borne. Of course, this mighty, magical forest was forbidden.
The forest grew and grew and soon, the tops of the tallest trees became visible from the village where Guinevere lived. People from the village started to take long walks to see this forest, and word quickly spread that it was beautiful and magical, yet it was forbidden. But, being a magical forest, you see, you only needed to be NEAR it, to feel the magic, and even the raging river that bordered the magical forest did not inhibit it's wonderous powers.
On hearing about the magical forest, Guinevere took a day out of cultivating her own fields, and headed for the tallest trees that were visible from the village where she lived. She sat on the bank of the raging river that bordered the magical forest and whispered a secret on the wind.
On her first visit to the magical forest, Guinevere encountered 'listening trees'. She was in awe of them.
Over the days and weeks that followed, Guinevere found herself drawn to the magical forest. It must have been it's beauty and the 'listening trees' that kept her returning - for it was indeed a thing of beauty and she harboured some very bitter secrets.
One day, on whispering to the 'listening trees', she felt a strange warm wind sweep over her and her sadnesses began to fade. That night, Guinevere couldn't sleep. She knew that the magical forest was forbidden, and yet she yearned to enter it. When she finally did drift off, she dreamt about its 'healing leaves' and branches that swayed in ways that were extraordinary, and she awoke with a burning determination.
Over the next few days, Guinevere forged a plan to cross the raging river. It wouldn't be easy because the rapids were many and the flow, a torrent - but she was determined. After much planning and a nerve-racking crusade, she succeeded. Standing amongst the trees and foliage of the magical forest, Guinevere felt the wonder of 'healing leaves' and branches that swayed in ways that were quite extraordinary. She danced amidst the tree trunks with joy and glee and invigoration. She felt wonderful.
A few days after Guinevere had entered the magical forest, those who cultivated, nurtured and tended to it noticed that some of the young saplings had been crushed, some of the hanging vines, broken; and some of the 'healing leaves', torn. More parasitic plants had sprouted than usual and this concerned them deeply. Yet the forest remained beautiful and quiet.
Guinevere had to return. Again, it took planning and a treacherous crossing - but she succeeded. Again, she danced in the tranquility of the magical forest, wandering deeper and deeper into the trees. She brought with her flowers and planted them in the rich, loamy soil of the magical forest. But, not being native to the magical forest, they didn't lasted terribly long - despite the fertility of the soil, the warmth of the sun and the shelter of the magical trees.
Again, those who cultivated, nurtured and tended to it - had their reasons for concern.
Guinevere returned again and again. She even spent an entire night in the forest - under a pale, silvery moon. With each visit, she noticed that a few more trees had died and that she had, in her frivolity, snapped some of the precious vines along the route where she had danced - but she assumed that the forest would recover from these things.
The forest did in a sense recover. In the place of fallen trees and broken vines, large, thorn bushes began to grow.
Guinevere kept on visiting the forest. For every one time she managed to enter the magical forest, there were a thousand times that she had to be content to simply stand on the opposite bank and just be near to it. But oh, how she loved to be there. She not only shared her secrets with the 'listening trees', she also told them stories and spoke of everyday things - some funny, some sad and some...well, just very everyday.
But, sometimes, when it rained, or when those who cultivated, nurtured and tended to it were visible from Guinevere's side of the river, she became angry because she felt that the 'listening trees' couldn't hear her or that it was too risky for her to speak in case those that cultivated, nurtured and tended to them heard her too. You see, instead of peacefully accepting that these very things were the life-blood of the magical forest - Guinevere grew stormy, difficult and even threatened to never return.
But the forest was always there when she snapped out of it - still as beautiful and peaceful as ever - but with it's own noises and sounds of course.
But, sadly, the magical forest was suffering from Guinevere's tenacity - from her damaging visits. Trees were dying and parasitic plants were sprouting up all over the place. Those who cultivated, nurtured and tended to it were angry and wanted answers from the 'listening trees'. But, of course, the forest remained beautiful and quiet. After all - there were no 'speaking trees', although the forest had its own sounds and noises, of course.
And still the thorn bushes grew and grew.
On entering the magical forest, one warm winter's day, Guinevere noticed the thorn bushes and tried her best to fight her way through them. After all, they had grown up in the very paths that she loved to dance along. Yet, they sliced her legs and tore at her skin. The thorns were poisonous and as she stumbled out of the forest, devastated and weeping - she thought she heard the magical trees sigh gently.
As Guinevere lay in her home, tending to the welts that had flared up from the poisonous thorns, she had a revelation. She suddenly saw things so very clearly and so very well. You see, the magical trees hadn't grown in HER back garden. The magical forest had never sought HER out - SHE had sought it out. The magical forest never needed or wanted anything from HER. SHE had needed and wanted something from it. The magical forest already had those who cultivated, nurtured and tended to it. It also had many admirers who visited it and who were content to enjoy it from the far bank of the river, never trying to cross the river. But, SHE wasn't one of those...either of those. She was Guinevere - the intruder, the destructive, the wrong.
She knew that the magical forest would not stop her from visiting it again. She could even cross the river and maybe wander amongst the trees and foliage in the places where the thorn trees hadn't grown. And it would still share its magic with her. But how could she? Wasn't she the one who had caused the thorn trees to grow where they grew in the first place? Wasn't she the one who had made more parasitic plants sprout up everywhere? Wasn't she part of the reason why those who cultivated, nurtured and tended to the magical forest were angry with it and seeking answers from it?
Oh, how she would miss the magical forest with its 'listening trees' and strange warm winds that had swept over her and melted away her sadnesses - with its 'healing leaves' and branches that swayed in ways that were quite extraordinary.
As she sat in the dark, pondering these things, she noticed a sliver of green peeking out from underneath her jacket. She quickly moved her jacket and felt a wave of thrill as she discovered that the sliver of green was in fact a small branch from a magical tree! She beamed with happiness and relief that she would still have some magic in her life.
*Isn't it a pity that she didn't know that magic doesn't work that way?*
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Arbchick
Okay. I read it. And here are my issues with it:
1. Once upon a time is reserved for fairy tales
2. The writing style is childish, in a sense
3. The villian isn't a very exciting villian
4. The hero is who exactly? The carer of the forest?
5. Listening trees. Please explain how you know a tree is listening?
6. Guinevere is an weird name
That's my 50 cents worth. Use it or not.
Bleeding gums....but okay
1. Yes it is...so?
2. Okay. I'm an amateur writer, see.
3. No, she probably isn't - silly bitch.
4. Well - yes and no. There's no true winners and true losers in real life - but, ja, I guess as a fairy tale - you've got a point.
5. Um Dewet......please try and use your imagination...kay?
6. I know that too.
Thanks. I wont use it as such because this story is just a story that I wrote about something...not for any other reason than just to write...I'm not going to do anything more with it - just maybe delete it...because I like deleting stuff...ALOT.
Once upon a time
there was a blogger called Arbchick. She blogged on a site called onelongminute.com. One day an evil troll decided he was going to visit. So in he snuck and thought he could take over with a few evil comments to get some reaction from the citizens. Unfortunately he didn't realise that the citizens here didn't really give a damn about his unsolicited comments. Arbchick, after reading his comments on one of her posts wanted to delete the post. But the rest of the bloggers knew that she never would and she would never let some evil troll's comments get to her. Arbchick continued to write and the evil troll felt the cold shoulders and left.
THE END!
Sems
You on a roll, here.....good one!
Ha ha ha Noss
I've just restrained the devil in me. You won't be seeing more of those in the near future :)
Hope you well, my friend :)
NOOOOOOOO
Don't restrain the she-devil....let her run free!!!
Noss
Unfortunately she has been getting me into A LOT of trouble recently. Need to put her away for a while. But she shall be back :)
and the winner of the best comment goes to...
semi you rock!
I would have thought the troll might have died a horrible, extremely painful and extended death though! if that had been in the Fairy Tale. I would have given you a 10/10, but 9 & 3/4/10 is good enough right?
:)
rodeboy
*curtsies* Thank you kind sir. What do I win? Huh? Huh? Huh?
Damn. Next time I will go for a 10 :)
semi
It is most definitely my pleasure :)
this is a tough one most definitely...
what don't you have? :)
10/10 gets you whatever you want.. 9-10 gets you pretty close to whatever you want...
rodeboy
*ahem* there is lots I don't have. The question is... what can you afford that will meet my standards? :)
Then 10/10 it shall definitely be in future... I always get whatever I want...
well semi
affordability is no real problem here... the truth is, what's the ROI... I am after all a business man :) *just kidding*
Dont worry rodeboy
you really do not have to say just kidding after each comment to me. I am not going to cut you into little pieces and feed you to the lions at Kruger Park for any comment. Neither am I going to jump into a plane and fly down to CT to make all your wildest dreams come true and show you your ROI *just kidding* ;)
thanks semi
you never know these days though... gotta be careful where I put my words ;)
You know, getting on the plane, might seem like a worthwhile ROI, somehow I just dont see my girlfriend taking that one so lightly... but considering you understood my ROI.... You are hired. ;-)
rodeboy
Well, your girlfriend is always welcome to join if she wants to ;). There is plenty ROI to go around. Ha ha ha.
Ag rodeboy, I am not super-sensitive... you can put your words anywhere you want and I will take them :)
Ha ha ha ha ha ha... you are a very good businessman.... because this went from being my winnings for a comment to you hiring me.... ha ha ha.
semi
now you are speaking my language... i'll definitely put the offer in this evening... ;)
not super-sensitive.. but where's the fun in that then. i mean I could put my words in many places, but whats the point if they don't tickle your fancy ;)
hey i just notice good potential and a great ROI... your winnings are just a bonus now :)
rodeboy
I'm sure you will make a very good pitch when you put the offer in :)
rodeboy, words tickle my fancy so you can put them in many places and they will hit the spot. The trick is to determine which would be a good spot and which not....
Btw, what if the investment is not worth the return? Then we have a little problem.
semi
thing is will the board accept my pitch ;)
i know a few good spots that could definitely tickle!!
well that again would all depend on how open one is to the investment :) there is no point throwing in an investment that wouldn't make an impact now is there? :)
The board, rodeboy
is open to big, strong really sound investments. There is no point being open to an investment that does not perform, now is there? :)
Hit the right spot and the pitch may just be willingly accepted!
read that as
nine and three quarters :)
Semisweet
What is your problem? I was purely making some observations. I hardly see why you feel the need to offload on me like this.
Im sorry dewet
Did I mention you anywhere in my story? I think not.......
Semisweet
I'm not dof you know.
dewet
42 (and a half)
Semi
He can't be a newbie otherwise he'd be asking what "42" means.....
or
maybe he just doesnt have the "balls" too? :)
Noss
You may be onto something there *ponders*
nossie and semisweet
What are you two on about anyway?
I wasn't talking to you about your writing, was I?
Why the attitude?
De Wet.
Skryf iets of fokof.
Ramon
I could not have said it better myself (even if I tried)
Sems
Whatever did you say to dewet that made him run off with his tail between his legs? Shame, man.....not.
Noss, me?
Absolutely nothing! *innocent look* I would never be intentionally mean to anybody! Not me! never!
Nah, I think he has to take a time-out to think up another comment. Or his mommy called him for dinner.
and
the crowd goes wild...
ARB!!
Dont you dare take any notice of this newbie.....you know better than that!!!!
No Nos
I don't. But it's fine. I can take a crit...see.
dewet
So lets have a squize at your first post then....
New name
same shit
Dusty
don't feed it!
Arb
The magical forest and magical trees reminded me of life and Ms G as one of those selfish people who suck the 'life' out of life.... until what was once beautiful is replaced by something thorny and hateful.
I really enjoyed this Arb.
shew Sems...
i guess - spot on.
Arbie
I had to read this again. For some reason this really speaks to me...
Arbchick
Aren't we all a bit old for fairy tales around here? Or am I misteken?
and you?
are you gonna write something or just sit in the peanut gallery? Or am i misteken?
geez.
dex
I'm sorry. English is not my first language. I see I spelt that wrong. Do you have a problem with that? And I am entitled to my opinion on writing, even if I don't write - am I not?
sure you are
just like i'm entitled to my opinion of your opinion.
You're also entitled to extract your head from your ass. Feel free.
dex
There is no need for that kind of hostility.
Haha...
...this guy are a funny bugger...
Yeah, probably Dewet
no doubt.
Arbchick
No offense. I just thought that this site was for adult readers.
Actually Dewet
it is for adult writers mainly. But, see - I get to be the childish prat that I am because I'm special. You know? 'schpeshial'.....
Weird user name dude.
Arbchick
I said I never meant it as an insult. Touchy.
Arb
Beautiful story.
Guinevere reminds me so much of Eve and the Garden of Eden. The myth of temptation and the loss of innocence. Perhaps another way to look at it is that through experience or qualia or a growth of knowledge we acquire wisdom. Through temptation and the loss of innocence we achieve enlightenment and gnosis.
And the trees. I reckon they still listen. I think it is just that we who no longer take notice.
Jeez, Arb.
You really put some effort into this. The Listening Trees sound so cool.
I don't know if you have any plans for this, but if you were to get a few of the villagers involved, as well as the people who look after the forest....Man, you could have a killer story.
Sheesh...thank you Ramon
I really appreciate that. I did put some effort into this. But, no doubt, I will delete it soon :)
But I really appreciate this comment.
But
what Guinevere didn't realise, was that she carried those seeds with her, the ones that grew thorns and scratches. But the truth was, that if she nurtured those seeds, with love, and not fear, she could grow a magical forest of her own. That the magical forest would welcome her. The destruction was merely the result of her own pain. Which the forest could heal, if she let it.
Magic is a powerful thing.
Arbie
A typically human trait - to take something beautiful, despite warnings to the contrary and spoil it for everyone. This fairytale is a parable (of sorts) and really gets the point across. Nice going, Arb.
Tarnished
I really had to laugh! You said it all....even down to the Nice going, Arb - which I know you intended to mean something completely different to how I read it....but how I read it...is sadly, the truth.
Viva idjits! Viva Viva Viva.
Arbie
..
Yes Tarnished
?
You were saying?