Dark Swiss Chocolate Elephants
Dark flavour, dark flavour;
dark chocolate cums.
In my teeth,
on my gums,
and on my glistening tongue.
I want to walk to the forests
of elephant dung.
Not only for business (I read 'bruises'),
but also for fun.
(Wouldn't it be great to be trampled upon?)
In the mist of the mountains,
and their brother,
The Sun.
Will you forget me?
I am all dust.
I'm done.
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Ramona
the cadence in this....amazing. More like a childrens nonsense song than a poem. But with a deeper, darker twist.
Ramon
Geez bru. The more poetry you write, the more I fall in love with your poetry. There was something so beautifully sensual and tactile about this. Amazing how words can at times be so rich and evocative that the become what you're writing about. There's magic in that.
Awesome.
Frally / Dolce.
Thanks for the comments. I don't know what I was thinking writing this, but I felt better afterwards ;)
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She humanises him...
Makes him touching...yet he remains...untouchable
Ramon
you may be...weirder than even me....
Take heart...you're a genius darlin'...it''s all good, I ..um think.
Arb. Me? weird?
Come on.
I wear pajamas. I eat bananas..........
Oh. No.
And what of...your book babes?
Tell me...what you doing with what you have?
I'm dying to know, you know...
You gonna tell me nana boy?
Ag, Arbs.
My friend and I...
Actually. Are you online for a few more minutes? I'll show you sketches of The Elf (I've changed the title, though).
You online?
I'm waiting for an answer.
As soon as I read Yes, I'll post one or two for 5 minutes. Then it's gone.
Don't reply to this messge or the pics one - I have to delete it.
Tonight, Arbs, you and I are spies.
YES
YES!!!
DID YOU GET THAT...I SAID YES!
Yebo...ja.....si!!!
Oh shit....delete and repost......
It's cool...just us right?
Stupid Cow.
Just kidding. Can't upload!
oh..okay
cool.
Gettng there........
Stupid.Fucking.Website.
stupid cow's still waiting...
only because she wants to :)
hehe. Good timing.
Cow.
Ramon
THOSE ARE SO UNIQUE...there is an arrogance in that boy...until he flies around that girl..
I like it...I really really like it
Arb.
The guy who draws these is very cool. Which makes it even more enjoyable. I couldn't upload the darker pictures.
I'll reveal a few more once I'm done with the story.
DO IT NOW PUSSIE!!!
come on...........i wanna see...
PLEASE
ok....no problem..listen up Ramon
and can you not respond to this comment
just read it?
I will post another saying NO Worries
that...YOU CAN RESPOND TO
Not that it probably matters, but, I think your writing is AMAZING
Lately, I have had my own stuff to deal with....so I never got into your latest 'story'
Not because a lack of faith...GOD KNOW!!! Just, life, see?
You have a talent boy..would have LOVED to have met you....but it doesn't make any difference
I still say...one day....I can say....I KNEW that guy when he was ...well...just a blogger!!
YOU GO RAMON! You HAVE WHAT IT TAKES! And we, here ALL KNOW THAT!
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Damn that Imageshack.
Can't do it.
Imageshack!!
Crap!
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