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Submitted by Tinkerbelle on April 26, 2008 - 09:12
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I fear this tangible infinity.
This void that suffocates me.
This flat line boiling with
volcanic under-currents.

Like twin supa novas
Imploding into each other
A black hole in space and time
Drawing all the matter
of us in.

I reach for you
from the blackness of my space.
For your light.
But time is warped
unforgiving, unrelenting.

We live in parallel universes
Destined to never
Share an orbit
In the stillness of me
I hurtle into a never ending
Odyssey of forever.

Comments

Tinkerbelle

Submitted by Semisweet on April 29, 2008 - 09:49.

The space between you and the one you want to be with... is dark!

Semisweet

Submitted by Tinkerbelle on April 30, 2008 - 16:51.

I don't come here often...only when very high or very low *read as: pissed or depressed*

Tinkerbelle

Submitted by Semisweet on May 1, 2008 - 21:28.

I think those are the only times we go to the places we don't want to go to under normal circumstances.

Tinkerbelle

Submitted by Arbchick on April 27, 2008 - 21:11.

All I can think of when I see your name now is:

bottysex, bottysex, bottysex, bottysex....

hehehe....aiy yai yai...

then you go and say things like:

'This void that suffocates me'

'volcanic under-currents'

'Like twin ....
Imploding into each other'

'A black hole'

Butt...hehehe.....no, seriously, I liked this chicka...it was assome...(crap!...I mean awesome)!

So Tinkerbelle

Submitted by Vapour on April 27, 2008 - 20:18.

I trust you never did the botty sex thing

Vapour

Submitted by Tinkerbelle on April 30, 2008 - 16:55.

No comment.

Tinkerbelle

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on April 26, 2008 - 13:02.

"parallel universes" - cool concept. Really enjoyed this poem.

Frankly/Lee/Ramon

Submitted by Tinkerbelle on April 26, 2008 - 13:04.

Thanks so much. I appreciate the positive feedback.

hi hi hi

Submitted by lee on April 26, 2008 - 12:13.

i dont count for much here but that is brilliant.

That's cool, Tinkerbelle.

Submitted by Ramon on April 26, 2008 - 09:47.

I'm not for 'love poetry', but this is cool, except for 'never ending' and 'forever'; a bit too much at the end there, for me.