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Failure

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 10:56
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Failure

A face broken,
In the silhouette of
Shame, as tears
Punctuate
Stifled screams.
Questions of redemption
Linger in static tension
Poised for the erratic
Dance of sorrow
Culminating in intention
Crushed beneath the
heel of
failure

Comments

Tinfish

Submitted by dex on February 19, 2008 - 09:14.

don't be too hard on yourself. We all fuck up now and then. Keeps life interesting.

Dex

Submitted by TiN on February 19, 2008 - 11:18.

I just don't know anymore about anything. Now that keeps life interesting.

TinNny

Submitted by Dolce on February 18, 2008 - 14:46.

what of the person who introduced you? Do you blame them? A genuine question. I wonder, would you or do you see your choice?

Dolce

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 15:34.

No I don't blame that person though it has destroyed our friendship.

TiN

Submitted by nossie on February 18, 2008 - 14:41.

I look forward to a blog you write entitled "Success" or "Triumph" or "Victory".....

Nossie

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 15:34.

I will.

And once it's done you'll be the first to see it.

He will Noss

Submitted by Semisweet on February 18, 2008 - 14:48.

Once he's conquered me *sweet smile*

Semi

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 15:35.

Hmmm...I like the thought of conquering you.

BTW your mail is very slow.

TiN

Submitted by Semisweet on February 18, 2008 - 15:47.

Could be quite an experience that *smile*

Im sorry. Dont know whats wrong with it. Its not normally so slow. Maybe my server doesn like your server!

Semi

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 15:49.

An experience of the highest quality, I reckon.

Obviously your server doesn't appreciate my hard drive.
Ahem...

TiN

Submitted by Semisweet on February 18, 2008 - 15:51.

and of record quantity I would think.

I'll have to speak to my server because I think your hard drive is damn fine!

Hectic TiN

Submitted by Vapour on February 18, 2008 - 13:48.

but then we are all guilty of deadly introductions.

True vaps

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 15:37.

but where does the line divide a deadly introduction from an introduction...So many questions in my head, man you know the what if's...

Failure

Submitted by Semisweet on February 18, 2008 - 11:19.

The secret to not let it crush you, is to get up immediately, dust yourself off and try again.

Semi

Submitted by TiN on February 18, 2008 - 11:25.

I wrote this for someone that I introduced into the deadly world of drugs...and in that way i have failed. but i'd rather dust you off...

You have mail.

TiN

Submitted by Semisweet on February 18, 2008 - 11:30.

Sorry. Nothing worse than handing someone over to the devil himself.
Yeah, guess you could work on those cobwebs a bit.

No, no mail from you. The only one I can access is the one I just mailed you from. If you replied to that.... then nothing yet!