Now read carefully, Mr 'Guest'

Submitted by adminguy on January 9, 2008 - 23:41

Get your fucking act together and resize your fucking monkeys, or piss off.

Come to think of it - just piss off. I don't see the numbers "2" or "4", or the promise of blind admiration here, do you?

Exactly.

G'bye now.

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Adminguy

Submitted by Semisweet on January 10, 2008 - 09:37.

Good on you. That stuff messed up this entire place last night. Thought there was something wrong with my eyes.
Thank goodness its all gone now. That poetry was just kak anyway

Adminjedi

Submitted by kachasu on January 10, 2008 - 08:15.

you are so hot when you are all stern and pissy-like.

makes me quite frisky.

Ja Chasu

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on January 10, 2008 - 08:17.

Sort of Nazi style with lederhosen. The kind that's just begging to be tied up and whiped a bit. Or licked from top to bottom.

you can lick his bum

Submitted by kachasu on January 10, 2008 - 08:21.

while i whip him a bit.

Chasu

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on January 10, 2008 - 08:23.

Let's get this clear - you may like the taste of shit. I quit frankly do not. Not that I speak from experience. But you be my guest. Given your predeliction for necrophilia who knows what the fuck turns you on.

Dusty Muffin

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on January 10, 2008 - 07:46.

So when are you stepping up to the plate to tackle your next piece of writing?

Oi Frallie!

Submitted by Dusty Muffin on January 10, 2008 - 08:00.

You be a slave-driver.

I've so enjoyed reading classy stuff these last few weeks, that I'm positively paralysed into non-action. And I know that you will accept that reaction by slapping me across the lughole with a vrot fish.

So I plan to remotivate myself with a newsletter or two, and perhaps some meaningful, insightful and moving notes to annual financial statements, OK?

Muffs

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on January 10, 2008 - 08:05.

You did some good stuff there the last time round and if you want to get serious about your writing you've got to write.

And newsletters and notes to financial statements are not writing and you know it. They are merely hiding away from what scares you.

If you want to write the only way to do it is to write. It is the simple act of repetition that makes you a better writer. You've got to get out here, quite chirping and join the action.

(Or not of course. The choice is all yours. But I reckon you should make a go of it. The stuff you wrote about your Grandfather was ace Dusty.)

Ag man Frallie

Submitted by Dusty Muffin on January 10, 2008 - 08:31.

Too early for you? Bit hungover? Not like you to miss a chirp...I know that newsletters do not constitute writing. But you are also right - I am scared of writing.

But, I've actually given this writing lark quite a bit of thinking time lately. I've realised that I don't have a book inside me, waiting to come out, and all that stuff. Without a passion for writing (such as you have), I don't believe I can make good writing happen. I agree that practice will improve my style, form, etc; so I will play a bit and enjoy writing for writing's sake. Hopefully a passion will be born and feed on itself.

I really enjoyed the Frog People project, and appreciated marijayn's very valid criticism. That's the sort of pottering that I would like to do for the moment - rising to a challenge, learning from my mistakes, and wondering, open-mouthed, at other people's accomplishments and interpretations.

(Um. Frallie. Grandpa's Story was not my writing. My mum 'interviewed' her father in 1986, and transcribed it (verbatim) last year. All I did was break it down into instalments, add some pictures and relevant links, and post it over 15 weeks. But thanks for the positive feedback - I'll pass it on to me mum!)

Dusty

Submitted by FranklyWrankles on January 10, 2008 - 08:40.

I chirp a lot, I know. But defining me to that one thing would make me very unidimensional, you know.

I shouldn't push you I guess but I love watching writers grow. It's one of my favourite things.

And you are right about the passion - you've got to love it. I guess for me it is an obsession, when I am not writing I feel miserable and to a degree filled with self loathing. Almost as if the writing defines me in a way.

And writing isn't writing a book. Or a novel. People have that misconception but writing is anything. Children's stories. Articles. Poetry. Essays. Letters. Jesus it can go anywhere your imagination can go.

And yes there's a need for passion and talent, but you'll be surprised how much great writing is about knowing words and how to use them. And that Muffs comes from practice. To a degree good writing, even great writing comes from walking fearlessly into your imagination but so much of it also comes from the discipline of writing often.

Anyway - just a thought.