Candy Stripe Dreams - 11: Judas' Wings

A shadow-melting sun crept through the leaves,
and perforated your eyes
when you looked at me and said your ‘wings’ were cramping up;
I smiled (‘wings’ also in a bit of a twist), pretending to be strong
(as Tree House Angels are),
and ignored the red exclamation marks in your dimples
while your tiny feet click-clacked away,
down the bamboo ladder steps.
You looked up, and let go of my hand—even now I lick my fingers, child,
hoping to taste sweet-sweat Kit-Kat,
instead of nicotine.

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Ramon

Beautifully evocative.

I like.

Freeman.

It's been sitting on the old PC for a long time. There's always been something wrong with it (probably still is), but I finally managed to grow some balls and post it. Glad you liked it. Thank you.