A beam of light — the purest white —
gleamed upon them,
entangling their senses with strange strings of euphoria
that sizzled the skin;
through the sickening odour of church dust they rose,
over empty church pews,
Sally McCormack and one of the twins.
Somewhere below a six-gun clattered;
through the silver shimmer
of mirrored disbelief Sally saw the church rats scamper,
and felt a pinprick
in her back where Billy was holding on to her bra strap—
a manicured hand
reached out and lifted them through the trapdoor.
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Makes me think of dry red dust and dry red winds blowing tumbleweed, and the kind of craziness that's born out of grinding poverty.
Nothing wrong witha bit of insanity, Jo.
Shakes things up a little, doesn't it? Having said that, I should probably mention that I mean 'insanity' in the way I (don't) understand it/think about it.
Ramon
Hey. How are ya? All the best for the new year and hope you continue writing your brilliant stuff.
But eish! I have been away for so long that I have lost touch with everything here. Will read and comment as soon as I can. I'm sure it's brilliant though ;)
Hiya, semi!
Yes, it's been a while. All the best to you too. I'm still standing. How are things your side?