And the black wings snap
as they meet and then bear down
- against the pressure -
into the winds teeth
and hover for a second
before the next pass over.
An Angel of Death -
face veiled against the night chill
- clad in black and white.
Wheeling, he circles
above the suburban house;
breathing in the grey
that seeps from its walls
and upwards into the sky.
He snorts in disgust.
One more worthless soul
straddling the fence and afraid
to live or to die.
Comments
Lily
This is a nice take on the Angel of Death. We often just think he is so happy to swoop down and take another soul. Guess his job must suck as well.
Very nice :)
Semi
You back from your run? Thanks a lot for your positive comments.
TL, my run?
Yep, I'm back. Bored at work today :)
No need to thank me. Your writing is awesome.
So much for that idea, Lily.
This is a great piece. I like the way he snorts.
Very cool.
Ramon
Thanks, as always, for your support. It means the world to me.
Jeez Lils
and you said you had nothing to write about.
Well this is a big fat bollocks to that.
This reminds me of the Nazgul in the Lord of the Rings.
But I also love the fact that even death finds us pathetic.
Fantastic.
Dolce
I figure that Death might have a more enjoyable time taking passionate beings (for good or evil) with definite ideas and beliefs rather than the average Joe who has trouble deciding what to have for supper, let alone anything more challenging! This was fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it.